Sunday, August 28, 2011

Chapter Four


Chapter Four
The Prince’s Escape
In a rush of black with not even the moon to guide the way, Prince Cand his new bride Evette darted around another corner. She stopped to catch her breath though he was still practically dragging her along.
“We mustn’t stop Evette. He’ll send his lions after us. And surely you know about the manticores.”
“I need to check on my baby, Calleo. If she starts crying they’ll be after us for sure,” She whispered back. “Come here Devon,” she cooed to the little baby and carefully took her out of Rachel’s arms.
Rachel was the young girl Calleo had rescued from the harsh villages around Luan Manor. She had dark brown hair, with light blonde highlights running through it from all the hours in the sun. She had green eyes that had a mysterious sparkle about them and the bridge of her nose was dappled in light freckles. When she smiled her teeth were near perfect.
Evette shook her red hair away from her face as she looked down at Devon’s face and smiled. You could see the love painted onto every inch of her face. Evette had a beauty that had a way of making people look at her and smile. Her eyes, surrounded by laugh lines, seemed to dance. The tips of her mouth were always twitching, as if they wanted to smile all the time.
Calleo came up behind her and was about to say again that they needed to move, but then he looked down into his daughter’s face and stopped. He tickled her belly and kissed his Princess’s cheek, and went over to whisper to Rachel.
“We’ll let her hang on to the baby a bit longer. You’ve been wonderful, but a mother gets attached to her child.”
He took the lead once again, moving more quickly this time to ensure they got out safely. When they had slipped around the last corner and the fortress was a silhouette behind them, Calleo allowed everyone a short break to breathe. They still had to work their way through the grounds, and tread carefully through the Wishful Wood before they made it into Modet, and then to the castle.
Rachel took Devon back into her arms, right after giving Princess Evette a slight once over to make sure she had no cuts or scratches that needed to be taken care of.
Then they were off again. Once they entered the Wishful Wood, Calleo turned to be sure they knew to be quiet. While the wood was beautiful, the side nearest the Lion Prince’s land was quite dangerous for young travelers at night. Evette took Devon from Rachel once again, and held her fiercely, so that Rachel could take care of herself. Evette had come to love Rachel as another daughter, and would protect her as much as the beautiful baby in her arms. Devon had clear blue eyes like her father, they were like rivers with millions of secrets swimming in them.
The dirt road led up to a rickety wooden bridge. In many places the wood appeared rotten, and the stench coming off the water was unbearable. This was because of the trolls that lived there. They had hair and beards like dirty moss, and long curved nails with dirt embedded under them.
Calleo stepped forward with his sword out. Slowly, he walked forward, motioning to the others to do the same. With no trouble, they began to cross the bridge.

Wednesday, August 24, 2011

Chapter Three


Chapter Three
Waiting


The abandoned streets of Modet now held limp streamers lying on the cobblestones. The prince had not yet returned. Darkness had fallen and turned the market tents into strange shapes and shadows in the night. Down in one house a small child was coughing. Candles created a warm glow as Sage called her mother into her bedroom. Ange hustled to her youngest daughter. Delphina and Jenna were asleep in their room, and Sage needed tending to. Stopping in the herb cabinet on the way down the small hallway, she saw they had nothing that would clear Sage’s chest. Entering her room, she saw Sage sitting up with tears streaming down her face. Though young, Sage already had long, black hair. Her green eyes were like whispering grass, and her skin was normally a smooth olive shade, though now pale and splotchy. Sage was only six, Jenna ten, and Delphina twelve. Delphina and Jenna had the same color hair as Sage, the difference being theirs was in curls. They had pretty, delicate faces, similar to china dolls, but much more lifelike, with a slight flush in their cheeks, and dimples that showed when they smiled.
“Hush, sweetie. It’s going to be all right. We’ll get you all better. Go and wake your sisters. Tell them to watch you until I get back from Robin’s,” she said as she fussed over her youngest daughter.
Sage sniffled and nodded as she ran down the hall wrapped in her oversized quilt. After one last look around the room, which contained a small bed, now missing the worn quilt, and a chipping wooden desk tucked in the corner, which was covered in scrap fabric of the prettiest colors that Sage loved to look at, she was off. Picking up a lantern on her way out the door, Ange climbed on her horse and rode down the lane.
Robin had been Ange’s best friend for as long as she could remember. Robin was a healer who lived in the fields around The Castle of Modet. She had cropped brown hair, short so that it wouldn’t get in her way when she tended the gardens. Her chocolate eyes were always bright and full of life. She had a young daughter, May. She looked just like her mother, and acted just like her too. She was even learning her way around the world of plants.
Ange saw that the coltsfoot was not growing by the door as usual. Robin had shown her the plants growing in her garden, and told her what they could do. She had told her to help herself when she needed to, but if none was left, the only other place to go were the palace gardens. She sighed, and remounted her horse, galloping off back into Modet.
Ange’s heart was pounding as she turned the corner towards the castle. Her breath caught in her throat when she felt hands pulling her off her horse. She tried to scream, but her mouth was covered and she was pushed back against the nearest cold, hard wall. She could not see her attacker, but his smelly breath was in her face as he growled,
“Where are you going this time of night? Don’t you have children?”
The moonlight glinted off his chest and she caught a glimpse of the golden manticore on his chest.
“N-no”, she stammered and gulped, trying hard to breathe.
He shoved her away roughly, and she fell onto the ground, whacking her cheek on a stone. She sat up gasping, and gingerly feeling her hurt face as she watched him ride off.
Ange scrambled up and tied her horse to a nearby post. She was right outside the servants entrance to the castle. She had some friends who could help her get cleaned up. Still shaking, she walked in and collapsed into a chair.
“Ange!” Lia shrieked when she saw the red marks on her neck, and the bruise on her cheek. “What happened?”
A young servant girl that Ange had never seen before rushed up with a bag of ice and Ange pressed it gratefully onto her face.
“Sage is sick. I needed coltsfoot from the gardens, and I was attacked by one of the Lion Prince’s men. I don’t know why they’re here. I don’t know how many, I only saw the one.”
All movement in the kitchen stopped, and everyone stared. Lia swore under her breath, and Ange looked confused.
“The prince and princess were supposed to slip back in tonight. We were all preparing for it, but they must have been found out somehow,” Lia explained.
The mood in the kitchen was suddenly frigid, as if even the dishes were on edge. Everyone nervously sat or paced, because all they could do was wait.

Tuesday, August 23, 2011

Chapter Two


Chapter Two
News for the Lion Prince
Melina stared at the dirty floor with hatred, as if it could inflict those feelings on its owner when he walked over it. The Lion Prince sat eating in the corner, her brother standing next to him with a tray of delicacies. They had the same brown hair and fair skin. She dunked the sponge again into the soapy water, and kept scrubbing, though her hands were sore and raw. Asher walked in. She hated him almost as much as the Prince, as he liked to be called, though no real royal blood ran through his veins. He ruled through fear, only through fear.
“My Prince,” he said.
The Lion Prince glanced up and beckoned him closer. He threw down the meat that could have fed all of the poor towns around his fortress, and waved Moreno away like a fly.
“Calleo was seen riding in this morning. Our spies have said he was going to the closest southern village to take his bride away with him.”
“Yes. I heard he has been visiting her for quite some time now. Seems our noble counterpart thinks he is invincible. Let him go. I’ll get my revenge soon enough.”
Asher nodded and turned to leave when the Lion Prince called him back.
“Asher. You’ve always hated Rojo. Wouldn’t want him to wind up with more authority around here than you, would you? Being bossed around by the same man who once followed you around like a puppy.”
And with that he summoned Moreno back to his side to resume stuffing himself. Asher walked out hurriedly with his head lowered, and it was all Melina could do not to make him slip on a few suds as he marched past.
Asher looked up with malice in his eyes. Rojo. Curse him. He slunk up behind him, unsuspected in the dark, and put a knife to his throat.
“Don’t get any foolish ideas in your head, you hear me?” he whispered menacingly into Rojo’s ear. “Or I might have some ideas of my own.”
He roughly pulled his knife back and shoved him out of his way.
~
Castor walked over to Mabel, Fablen, and Firethorn. Firethorn laughed at the expression on Castor’s face.
“You don’t get tired of beating him, do you?” he asked, cuffing him on the shoulder. “You may come off slightly grumpy, but you like it.”
“That’s enough outta you,” he said to Firethorn, and shook his head. I just don’t understand. Why is he always knocking at my door so much?”
“He just wants to make a name for himself, they all do,” Mabel said. “Beating you is the best way to do it.”
They were silenced by hoof beats thundering through the air. The clanging of swords met their ears, and tremors of fear went through their hearts as they realized who was riding into their square.
Asher, the Lion Prince’s right hand man, was looking down at them from his majestic horse.
What a shame that something so beautiful had to be a ride for someone so horrible, Fablen thought.
Asher was flanked by Rojo, the best knife thrower in the Lion Prince’s service, and Aria, who was the most handy with a sword. Rojo unrolled a scroll, and it was apparent from Asher’s face he did not like that he wasn’t the one to deliver their master’s important message.
“This is the Lion Prince’s request. A duel with the quarter master of Modet, the best that Boreal has to offer.”
He looked pleased with the reaction, though Rojo always seemed smug.
A hush had fallen over the crowd that had been laughing excitedly just a minute ago as they watched just that, a duel. Only that duel had been for fun, just between friends.
“He will be waiting at dawn, in three days, on the bridge leading to Olvia. Castor is to come alone, no human being may accompany him, with any one weapon of his choice. Come, or never see your prince again.”
With one last look around, the men-at-arms turned and rode back towards where they had come. Fablen turned to Castor before realizing he wasn’t there. Slipping away like the wind was something else Castor was good at, though he never did it in a time of danger. Castor was the opposite if a coward, not one to run away from a fight.
Fairies fluttered along the edge of the wood, turning the lime green leaves into a rainbow. Fairies were fascinating between the way they could remember a name or face for years, and were among the smartest of all, though some thought them to be quite vain. They lived near the pools and Wishing Wells in the Wishful Wood. They could spend as long staring at their reflections as they could remember a person’s features.
The pools they would sit by looked as if you could jump through them into another world. The tall grasses seemed to whisper to you, lure you in towards the rocks piled on the sides that were rich shades of red.
The fairies were not the only fascinating creatures in Boreal, however. There were brownies, trolls, giants, dwarves, philly phantoms, and more.
The brownies would sometimes live in the wild, but usually they lived in peoples houses, in old fairy nests, or crooks and crannies. They would stir ink and tend to the candles-lighting them, putting them out, trimming the wick.
Brownies were no larger then mice. They were about as tall as one of your fingers and could stand in the palm of your hands. They wore patchwork clothes, made out of whatever they found while they were working.
Scribes would usually own brownies. They would have them stir their ink, sharpen their quills.
They were known for their sarcastic attitudes, and they were always trying to get food out of their families- they loved what wasn’t good for them. Brownies were also talented spies, as they were barely noticeable, and could slip under doors and cracked windows unnotticed. They would also send messages, they just had to be careful because they were so tiny.
The dwarves lived up in Stonegate Mountain, where they could mine without being disturbed. They had abandoned their old caves long ago, when people began to inhabit Modet. Now they stayed far north of all the life; the only other creature they were close to was the elves. The elves lived in the valley below the mountain, and they were scarcely ever seen. You could only find their home if you knew where it was, it was not the kind of thing you just stumbled upon. They lived on the more welcoming side of the Wishful Wood, and this was where Castor was headed. He would need the dwarves help, along with the elves.
He reached the stone gate at the foot of the mountain. He knew from his years of training with the elves that this was just one of their camouflage tricks. They were very solitary creatures.
The gate appeared to be crumbling in some places, and vines and moss had began to take it over. Castor knew that if he murmured the right words, he would be able to pass through and see everything the way it really was. If he said the wrong thing, he would turn around wondering what he was doing there. A few whispered words and he was through, turning around to see a magnificently carved stone gate. It was adorned with stone flowers and fairies and the symbol of the dwarves on one side and the elves on another. To those who knew how to read it, this gate was a map of the world inside the mountain.
Where the dwarves’ symbol lay was the direction to the entrance of their caves, hidden almost as well as this map. The symbol next to theirs showed a pile of rocks with one disguised crevice that would lead you inside.
The other direction would take you to the elves. The symbol on their side showed an aging tree, which to the inexperienced eye would think matched all the others, but had an exaggerated knot that could reveal all to you if pressed the right way.
Even these were not given to the person who could pass through the gates. No, they were secretive, the elves especially. They were disguised with leaves and branches, carefully placed by the elves to look like decoration, hiding the intricate map that the dwarves had created in their mine. It was an effort of teamwork, but nothing could fool Castor, who had been there when it was built.
He had been a young boy when his parents died in the fire that burned down their silversmiths shop. He had run away from Modet, promising his younger siblings he would come back one day able to defend them from anything. He had had the instinct to find the dwarves, who taught them all they knew, and from there had gone to anyone who would teach him anything. Now he was the quarter master of Boreal, friend of Prince Castor, and respected by all who knew his name. So different from the day he had watched wide eyed as they had assembled this masterpiece.
He quickly turned left, towards the caves. After pushing his way inside, Castor navigated through the tunnels almost as well as the dwarves themselves.
“Ah. Castor. The great and revered quarter master of Boreal. Whose stone spear heads can survive anything.”
“Morin!” Castor wheeled around and his face broke into a relieved grin. He ran towards the dwarf who had been like a father to him after the accident.
“No, no. I haven’t changed. Keep your human hands to yourself, I won’t even shake it.”
Castor let his hand drop.
“So how have you been?” he asked, studying the stubby beard and friendly smile lines.
“Oh, fine. I’ve heard the Lion Prince has been getting more ambitious. A duel, with you? Hah, let him try,” was Morin’s contemptuous response. The Lion Prince was hated by all, far and wide.
“But that’s just the thing. If I beat him, it will only infuriate him more. He doesn’t like being humiliated.”
“I see, you’ve come for advice. Or help. Which is it?”
“Both. I have a plan that I think can work, but I need your help. And the elves.”
Morin sighed and turned to look Castor in the face.

Monday, August 22, 2011

The Rest of Chapter One

Chapter One
Modet
In a time of swept cobblestone streets and pies baking in windows; brownies scampering around, and dwarves mining in the mountains, the sun beat down and all was cheery and peaceful. Children’s laughter could be heard ringing throughout the streets as they played with the stray cats, and enjoyed the sweet sugar that the Sugar Weavers could spare from their work. The Taining Folk would spend time out in the sunlight, standing around and telling stories to the young ones chased out of their homes by mothers who needed to get work done. Their small feet barely made a noise as they ran along the road towards the camp of the Taining Folk. Soon the logs that were placed around empty firesides came into view, and the little ones could see the distinct red and white stripes of the Taining Folks’ tents.
“Mabel, Mabel!” Delphina cried as her two youngest sisters followed behind her.
Their young faces were eager and hopeful, and Mabel could tell what was coming next.
“Will you tell us a story, please?” they begged.
Mabel was a story teller of the Taining Folk, and one of the best around. They were known all over for how they traveled from city to city, earning money from the performances they put on. They never stayed anywhere for long, but Modet was the closest place they had to call a home. People there loved what they had to offer. One of those things was the acrobats, like Fablen, who was standing there now. It was as if they sat on the clouds, danced with the birds. Their tightropes were always placed high in the air, so that you had to look straight up to watch, and though your neck became sore afterwards, it was always well worth it. The story tellers, like Mabel, saved their talent for next to the fire at night, when the phantom stories would make you jump, and the tales of Wishing Wells, brownies, fairies, tree folk, and elves would be in your dreams for weeks. Mabel’s other close friend was Firethorn. He stood there watching the children closely, as if they were the real threat. He never had gotten the hang of children.
How do some people do it? he would wonder. Like Mabel. She’s just so good with them.
He himself just couldn’t tell the stories or wipe the noses. His trade dealt with fire. Something different than children. It could be tamed but not played with in the same way. Those who watched Firethorn thought differently. The way he made the fire take shape, run up his arms. The way he could rescue anything from fire, never worried if it would burn him. He made it look like a game, just like the actors with their masks, or the singers with their melodies. But today was different. He was in no mood to put on a show, and Mabel was obviously feeling the same.
“Not today. Come back in the morning and I’ll see what I can do. It will give me time to think up something extra good.”
She said this without the usual sparkle in her eyes, Firethorn noticed. Delphina’s face drooped along with her sisters, but they knew not to protest. She turned and walked away, surely to request a song or a skit, to avoid helping their mother Ange with the laundry. Ange was the court launder, but the fact that that was her title meant nothing. She lived as a peasant, and was as humble as one to. Delphina ran up and started tugging on Roana’s dress, followed by Jenna, and little Sage. Fablen watched them go with a smile. She turned back to Firethorn and Mabel.
“When will the Prince be getting back?” she asked in a hushed voice.
“He was meant to be back today with his bride. The festivities have been postponed. Everyone is restless to be leaving, but they won’t miss the celebrations,” Mabel answered, just as quietly.
Firethorn glanced around as if nervous someone might be listening.
“I heard her name was Evette. The stories are that she already has a baby, and Calleo found a poor girl now living like royalty as her maid,” he whispered, so softly that the two women had to put their heads down to hear him.
A sugar weaver pushed another cart towards the castle, which was being made to sparkle for the Prince’s return. In the afternoon sunlight, the desired affect was definitely being achieved. Mabel slapped him playfully.
“What stories? Where do you hear these things, Firethorn?” she asked, watching him.
He shrugged.
“You said you didn’t want to know where I wander during the night,” was his response, as he looked at his hands.
It was true. She hadn’t been able to sleep one night and had caught him sneaking back into the camp at daybreak. All Firethorn would say was that the tents were too stuffy for him. He had is secrets, she knew that as well as anyone, and had refused his explanation. Fablen scanned the horizon line with worried wrinkles in her brow.
“I hope the Lion Prince left them alone. It makes him mad when people escape his realm.”
The Lion Prince was the ruler of Olvia, the country bordering Boreal. Modet was Boreal’s capital, and the closest thing that Olvia had to a capital was where the Lion Prince lived, also known as Luan Manor. Luan Manor was nothing like the Castle of Modet. It was not cheery or bright. In contrast, it was dark and eerie. Vines had begun to climb up the walls and the small burned huts around it were starting to crumble in places. When the moon hit it just right, the castle would cast a large, menacing shadow, and the silver moonlight would give it a ghostly glow around the edges.
He had a clean shaven face, but it was covered in grey wrinkles, as if for every time he killed a new line had been etched into his face. He had a heart of roughened stone, cold, grey and barren, holding love and sympathy for no one. His soul was made of his victim’s screams. He fed off of fear like fungi off trees.
The Lion Prince controlled all the lion packs in the Wishful Wood. His most vicious pack of lions was the manticores. They had spots like cheetahs, and grey hair, and beards like dust.
His shoes clicked and echoed ominously when he walked through his castle’s hollow halls. His fortress threw a threatening shadow across the Wishful Wood. Any soul careless enough to enter his land should hope never to come out again. His crest of the roaring manticore on a black shield hung above every door in the fortress, and it had many. He had magnificent living quarters; they were the most decorated rooms in the castle. The dungeons were cold and unkempt human sized cages. They pitied their prisoners as little as their ruthless owner. The turrets and towers were cold and lifeless and all the windows were draped in black. Soldiers and men at arms stood with swords and shields at the ready. He had many maids and other servants that he beat into cooperation. If they tried to escape or disobey him, they were all punished severely. Some were girls as young as twelve and thirteen. They were forced to leave their families to be enslaved to him.
His banquet hall had glossy wooden tables that stretched from wall to wall. The castle itself was made of cold stone.  Stories said that anyone with a warm heart would freeze when they touched it. The Lion Prince and his followers were immune.
Mabel shook her head.
“Calleo knows that,” she said. “He may just be waiting for the right time to sneak her out. Ange said that she lived close to his castle, in the corner of his eye. That’s where he has all the beautiful women stay, probably so nothing like this can ever happen to them.”
Mabel was close to Ange after all the times she had taken such good care of her children, but then most people were close friends with Ange. She heard things during her trips to the castle, and though she didn’t go near the prince or his close advisors, she knew some maids who did, and they were good listeners.
“Or other reasons. He needs a son, an heir. Most likely he doesn’t want Evette going off with Calleo because this kingdom might get what he wants,” Firethorn added.
Fairies swarmed around the castle, hoping for a taste of the sugar. They had purple skin and tie-dyed dresses, which made them stand out in their home of the Wishful Wood. Fablen distracted them with a few strands of her hair and they chattered happily. Fablen had beautiful hair. It was a dark, curly brown that cascaded down to her shoulders, and brought out her green eyes. The fairies could use it in their homes, which were intricate series of nests in the forest. They could use the hair to keep warm, or even as rope between nests, they were so light.
It was the opposite of Mabel, who had strawberry blonde hair and blue eyes that seemed to change color in the light. They were different kinds of beautiful, though modestly. The minstrel women never really tried hard with their appearances.
They saw people forming a circle around two men. The trio went down the road to see what was going on. Fablen’s expression showed she was resigned to the situation in an ‘I told you so’ way, mixed with disbelief at how absurd it was.
“Burk has such a big head. We all know as well as he does that he has no hope of ever defeating Castor,” she muttered to her friends.
Mabel nodded. Burk wore the green and blue of Modet on the cape over his armor. He was standing outside Castor’s door, knocking, his helmet in his hand. His sword was at his belt. Castor opened the door, and when he saw who it was he let out an exasperated sigh.
“Again, Burk?” he said. “Will you ever get put in your place?”
“Just because you’re the quarter master and have a house full of weapons doesn’t mean anything. I can beat you. Today I’m really ready.”
Castor just shook his head. He turned and grabbed a sword lying near the door and stepped outside. After a few strikes, over-weight Burk was breathing heavy, and Castor had dropped his sword. He kicked and punched, and finally pinned Burk down.
“Really ready? Go away Burk,” he said, standing up.
Castor rolled his eyes as Burk tried to stand, gasping. He put his sword away, with all the other weapons he had created that lined his walls, next to the knives and swords that were so shiny they glinted when sheathed, bow and arrow sets that he could shoot straight in a hundred mile wind. He learned how to create such things from wood from the elves, some of his many teachers. The tree folk taught him camouflage. Growing up he would watch his father as a silversmith, and his uncle as a blacksmith. They taught him how to work with metal, like the dwarves taught him how to work with stone.
Also a master of every martial art, he was quick and agile, with a warrior’s build. His shoulders were broad and strong, his legs and arms pure muscle. His skin was a deep tan from all the hours spent in the sun training for the fights that were yet to come. He wore a billowing white shirt that was snug at the wrists and waist. On the bottom he sported skin colored leggings and often went barefoot, his feet more toughened than any shoe.
Soldiers like Burk often tried to make a name for themselves by fighting him, and he was the most persistent. There is no way to even think of how good you would have to be in order to beat him.
Blays, Burk’s half brother, (though much smarter than Burk), laughed jokingly as he helped him up.
“You will never learn, eh?” he said while chuckling. “You just make a bigger fool of yourself when you can’t give up.”
“One day,” was all that Burk replied as he stormed off to the castle.

Sunday, August 21, 2011

Chapter One: The Characters and Setting

Characters:
Mabel- a story teller in the Taining Folk

Fablen- An acrobat in the Taining Folk

Firethorn- A fire eater in the Taining Folk

Castor- The Quarter Master of Boreal

Burk- A Soldier of Modet castle

Blays- Burk's brother, also a soldier

Delphina- A young girl from Modet

Jenna- Her younger sister

Sage- Their youngest sister

Those are the characters who have a part in Chapter One, and aren't just mentioned. They will all come up more and more, so remember who they are!

The setting:

Modet, Boreal

Boreal is my made up country. Modet is it's capital. This chapter takes place mainly near the castle of Modet.

Castor: The Main Character


You can wait to read about him in the book, or just look at this. It was a part of my planning. :)


Castor the Quarter Master

Male
Twenties
Human
Warrior, Prince’s Friend


Fears: The pain of love
Strengths: Weapon Making, Fighting
Weaknesses: His Heart
I love: His skills
Good Points: Good Friend, Sense of humor, Skilled Fighter
Relationships: Good with creatures/people like him


Hobbies: Creating weapons, practicing, fighting, being stealthy, walking to think
Talents: Creating weapons, fighting, being stealthy and agile
History: Parents died in fire, dad was blacksmith, uncle was silversmith, trained by dwarves and elves
Personal Goal: To be prepared to defend from anything
Bad habits: Shies away from love


Clothing: Tan brown pants, billowing white shirt, flat shoes
Appearance: tan skin, sandy hair, blue eyes, lots of muscle, very strong
What you would find in his room: tools, old scraps of things saved from the fire, ex. Fathers old blacksmith’s tools, scrap of mother’s old dress
Friends with Mabel, Firethorn, Fablen, and Prince Calleo
Occupation: Quarter Master


Emotions: Happy around friends, Feels safe and assured while practicing, Annoyed when people try to fight him that he always beats



Relationships: Good friend and advisor to the king, kind of likes Fablen, friends with Fire thorn and Mabel



The Lion Prince looked up in shock. “Who let you in here?”
“What, me?” Castor asked, shrugging, his sword still in hand. “No one. It was all me.” he grinned, twirling the sword.
The Prince brought his fist down hard on his thrown, fire in his eyes, he looked up once again.



Flaws: Afraid of too much commitment, shies away from lots of love

Saturday, August 20, 2011

The Beginning of Chapter One

(This is some of the description at the very beginning of the book.)


Chapter One
Modet
In a time of swept cobblestone streets and pies baking in windows; brownies scampering around, and dwarves mining in the mountains, the sun beat down and all was cheery and peaceful. Children’s laughter could be heard ringing throughout the streets as they played with the stray cats, and enjoyed the sweet sugar that the Sugar Weavers could spare from their work. The Taining Folk would spend time out in the sunlight, standing around and telling stories to the young ones chased out of their homes by mothers who needed to get work done. Their small feet barely made a noise as they ran along the road towards the camp of the Taining Folk. Soon the logs that were placed around empty firesides came into view, and the little ones could see the distinct red and white stripes of the Taining Folks’ tents.